Students were asked to write a paragraph on why or why not public schools should be operated on a year-round schedule, without a summer break. This is Marcus's first draft.
Pro: Year round would help moms and dads who work.
Year round would help students remember stuff (rather than forgetting it over the summer).
Con: Students would burn out without a summer vacation.
Teachers would burn out without a summer vacation.
Many people discuss the issue of operating public schools on a year-round schedule. I would not have enjoyed going to school on a year-round schedule, but I understand
the benefits of the idea. My cousin's school has the year-round schedule. His school was first in state football. There are lots of different feelings on this issue.
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Part 1
What do you think of Marcus's paragraph?
A.
It looks as if he spent a great deal of time on this draft.
B.
With just a little more work, it will be fine.
C.
It's a good first draft.
D.
It's a long way from being a good first draft.
Students were asked to write a paragraph on why or why not public schools should be operated on a year-round schedule, without a summer break. This is Marcus's first draft. Pro: Year round would help moms and dads who work. [ Year round would help students remember stuff (rather than forgetting it over the summer). Con: Students would burn out without a summer vacation. Teachers would burn out without a summer vacation. Many people discuss the issue of operating public schools on a year-round schedule. I would not have enjoyed going to school on a year-round schedule, but I understand the
benefits of the idea. My cousin's school has the year-round schedule. His school was first in state football. There are lots of different feelings on this issue. Marcus's paragraph: With just a little more work, it will be fine.
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