Outline on what topic? User:
buying a home is better than renting an apartment Weegy:
You can start with enumerating the advantages of owning a home. And you can make those advantages as your key thoughts. User:
this is all I have so far will you look at it Weegy:
I. Buying a house is more beneficial than renting an apartment.
1. Buying a house saves you money.
2. Buying a home is a better investment than renting an apartment.
II. Buying a house leaves you with more security than renting an apartment.
1. Buying a home allows you to make changes as you want.
2. Buying a home allows you to make your own rules.
That's okay. But in your first major topic, you used the term 'beneficial' and is not clear on what aspect. I suggest you use 'financial benefits' instead. User:
So how would you say it? Weegy:
Buying a house has more financial benefits than renting an apartment. User:
what about III.Buying a home gives you more security than renting an apartment. what would you say under that? Weegy:
I think security, too, is a vague term. What comes to my mind when you say security is protection from against danger, damage, or loss, or criminal activity. [ But basing on the topics under that, you mean making changes as you want and making your own rules. I think it's a different kind of security that you mean, right? You could have an additional term before the security to make the thought clear. ] User:
ok so how would you word that then? by the way thank you for being so nice I asked this same thing earlier and that expert was very rude Weegy:
You could say owning a home brings personal freedom to create your own personal space. Welcome and thanks for the compliment. [smile] I would be glad in assisting you in your future inquiries. User:
so you would put that where I have Buying a house leaves you with more security than renting an apartment. Weegy:
Yes, or you could use that instead of 'Buying a house leaves you ... (More)